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Friday, March 7, 2008

Okay i no i've been gone 4 a while... had some things 2 cope with... but now i'm back and running on 13 cylinders!!! here's a poem i wrote...

I looked in your eyes,
the time then flew by,
the once lonely moment,
was gone: bye, bye.

That white dress came soon,
and so did "I do."
you left for the army,
and never came through.

That news came at last,
to only make me cry,
I would take your place,
If only i'd die.

Our daughter just talked,
her very first word,
wish you could be here,
your with the lord.

She is now two,
walking around,
she looks just like you,
on the dusty ground.


This is for all the people who have lost a loved one in the Army. Hope you like it.

~Nudge

3 comments:

Angel said...

Confusing at some parts, but other than that, it's great! U know, u should post about your broken toes.... :D

Nudge said...

mayb...

Anonymous said...

i personally heart this. although people say my poetry is morbid... idk why?